Emily Minarik
2/23/2016 09:32:48 am
I really like the idea of this! I think it will turn out really well, and it is cool that you are including a few decades of Spiderman. Your sequencing adequately represents Spiderman's transformation throughout time. Between the montages and swinging shots, your audiences will be able to see several points of view. It will be easier for the audience to see the variation of angles once your storyboard becomes a video. Your video will heavily rely on the visual and aural modes, and I think that it will be great.
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Madeline Kriegel
2/23/2016 09:33:28 am
I love how you order the images in order to show the rise of Spiderman (from the 60's - Andrew Garfield) as we know him today. I think the main thing I remember about meeting you for the first time is that you had a Spiderman backpack, so I also love how this is a personal project for you. Since there's only 6 slides so far, I'm not quite sure where you'll go with each of them, and so it's a bit hard for me to offer critiques. You seem to show a great variety of scenes, from Spiderman himself to Stan Lee to the history of the character. Visually, spatially, and linguistically it looks great. Aurally i'm wondering where you'll go with that, whether you'll have music or your own voice narrating, etc.
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